Dallas PUA

So I have been trying to set up a day 2 completely via text since I have never done it (I always use the phone). With Carmel's assistance, I had the following exchange with my LR from last weekend.

ME: Last night was so fun! We ended up in OKC, what do you recommend?
Her: You mean to eat?
ME: That's not fun, I'm looking for something to do while my friends are at work
Her: Oh thats tricky im not sure what to tell you
ME: You're gonna be a novelist you are more creative than that :)
Her: Well then I like going to the crystal bridge downtown, my sister suggests the zoo...
ME: I think I've heard about crystal bridge what makes it fun?
Her: If you like nature its nice and meditative
ME: I've never been there I love nature let's go!!
Her: Aw I would love to but im at work too :(
ME: You never have time for me anymore...this engagement is off ;) lol
Her: Lol thats so sad
ME: So you must work at a family business then. I couldn't work with my bro :)

I baited her into suggesting something cool and then invited her. After she suggested a place I made her tell me why it was cool to get her thinking about why she likes the place. The line about calling off the engagement was a riff on the role play about her being my fiance at the bar. I was thinking about fluffing a bit and then telling her we are going out tonight. What do people think?

hey are you still at my house, im hungry...lets go grab a bite to eat. Nervous betty, i see she did reply! always push the comfort envelope. I would tell her you should come out so i can fuck you in some inconspicuous spot again....ok dont do that! but i like the way you framed the going out. Reminds me of something finesse would do.