Text game critique

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BTW I was just catching up reading my blogrolls, and it seems ET is talking about baiting and such.

Very Good Stuff Here.

[link=http://the-red-mole.blogspot.com/2008/05/el-topo-text-game-part-2.html]http://the-red-mole.blogspot.com/2008/05/el-topo-text-game-part-2.html[/link]

Check it out.

Also, keep in mind that excercise I taught you. Think of a topic/thing you want, and go with it via that exercise. Keep practicing that man, that is the basics of baiting, framing and qualifing.