Critique me.

[Scoundrel]

I’ve just re-written my profile on POF. I’d like to hear what you guys think.

http://www.plentyoffish.com/member2530166.htm

[Kalop]

Looks pretty good to me... I'd maybe subtract some facts and try to stir some more emotions.. but dont ask me how to do it online in text, I havent figured it out yet, you can see my myspace page is pretty boring, not much details... but I seem to get a shitload of friend requests, who knows.

What is that plenty of fish site? never heard of it before.. is seems like a myspace of facebook ??

I use to hate and look down on the online stuff.. in fact my myspace page is only couple weeks old... but it's seems WAYYYY easier to me than club venues? Its almost like shooting fish in a barrell.

L8r

PS) For some reason Scoundrel you remind me of russ martin... lol

[Scoundrel]

POF is a free online dating site.

Russ Martin? I guess that's a good thing.